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Guardian of the Solar Path

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MY LITTLE POEM
– Ponies with Amorphis

[ Click here for the accompanying song]

Guardian of the Solar Path



Ancient is the course of Sun
Olden are its kind, warming beams
Awaking the world for each day
When rising over horizon
For the new journey…

Shine, give your light above their homes
In care of princess white


Gently leading her Sun
Above the tranquil sky
Mother's smile shines with the child
Caressing their days
As she watches over her child
Guarding its path (the solar path)

Guiding their daily lives with love
Follow the trail 'til eventide arrives
Let them enjoy the peaceful night with Moon…

Reach out the ethereal
O, Princess Daylight
Radiant in life
Lighting their daily paths
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LISTEN THIS SONG WITH THE POEM FOR MAXIMUM IMPACT [link]

Happy Midsummer everybody! Have a nicely summerly poem with Celestia, Sun, and Amorphis’ ballad “My Sun” (seewutIdidthar?).

This one’s been waiting a chance to be submitted for a while. Originally it was supposed to open the summer before the Cutie Mark Poems, but getting the thumbnail permission took some time, so CMP was started earlier and this was turned into a celebratory piece for Midsummer. And actually fits it much better than I originally intented.

Here I also wanted to write for once a simpler, short poem with a single chorus. I think it worked! Now I can get lazy and write shorter poems :iconfluttershylaughplz: not!

Writing a poem about Celestia was both an easy decision and a difficult task. There weren’t really any angst potential unlike for Luna, and there already exists a wonderful character poem anyway, ~Light-of-Dusk’s “Tribute to Celestia: the First Alicorn Princess”, which I tried to avoid in my own interpretation. Thus the end result is more distant depiction of a moment rather than a character piece, telling almost more about the Sun than its princess.


My Little Pony (c) :iconhasbroplz:
"My Sun" (c) Amorphis, from the album “Skyforger”. Written by Tomi Koivusaari
Song is used as a soundtrack for the lyrical content in terms of tribute, homage, parody and ponies.
Le thumbnail is "Morning Ritual" [link] :iconclopin98:

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My MLP poetry, My Little Poems, can be found here [link]
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Vessel42's avatar
I usually don't read poems.

But when I do...

I prefer My Little Pony.

...that made sense, right?