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IV: Elements

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The Sun Goddess Saga
– Ponies with Ensiferum

[Click here for the accompanying song]


Fourth Poem:
Elements



As was in legends told
Of the fight between the kin
The ancient power unfold
It chained the elder's light within

Upon the forgotten ruins
Wayfarers reach the journey's end
Defying the curses of karma
Found their path through the woods

In the old halls of Moon and Sun
Search for the gems of oldest force
The elements born of the virtuous realm
The foundation of the peaceful world

The power stronger than gods
Once it shimmered, now waned
Concealed away from mortals
Resting in stone-cold veil

Gathered the five of the stones
But how to unleash the last
Only clues left in riddles
The answers hidden within the past

In the old halls of moon and sun
Were found the gems of oldest force
The elements born of the virtuous realm
The foundation of peaceful world

Through the dangers we found the relics
To be deadlocked in the final line?
Confound the mentor,
Under what purpose
Nothing but questions left behind


In the old halls of moon and sun
Rested the gems of oldest force
The elements born of the virtuous realm
The foundation of the peaceful world

In the old halls of moon and sun
Frozen the gems of oldest force
The elements born of the virtuous realm
The foundation of peaceful world
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The Sun Goddess Saga is a poetic interpretation of a Lunaverse fanfiction “Longest Night, Longest Day” by RainbowDoubleDash, adapted into the music of symphonic folk metal band Ensiferum.


PART 1 [link]
PART 2 [link]
PART 3 [link]
PART 4 [link]
PART 5 [link]
PART 6 [link]


My Little Pony © :iconhasbroplz:
“Smoking Ruins” © Ensiferum, from the album “From Afar”. Written by Markus Toivonen and Sami Hinkka.
Songs are used as a soundtrack for the lyrical content in terms of tribute, homage, parody and ponies.
The thumbnail is “Solar Empire” [link] by :iconaman692: Picture is edited slightly with an added text.
Lunaverse and "Longest Night, Longest Day" created by RainbowDoubleDash

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My MLP poetry, My Little Poems, can be found here [link]

More of The Lunaverse: [link]
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Light-of-Dusk's avatar
As to be expected, a most epic rendition of the Sun Goddesses' fall! I always admire the clarity of your writing, with each stanza beautifully arranged to grant pellucid visualisations.
And, I must add that the Lunaverse certainly creates an interesting avenue of storytelling.
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