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THE CUTIE MARK POEMS
– Ponies with Amorphis

[Click here for the accompanying song]

Learning to Smile



I was a child of stones
A daughter of the rock farmers
No joy was known there
But gloom and endless working

Under the hot, blazing sun
The barren fields, all without green
Granites were our flowers
Our grass made of sand and gravel

I breathed the choking air on the wordless world
I walked on soil bare of seeds…


In a poor family among rocks
A child was born with a bright mane
Pink coat in colorless home
Such a punchline in a grey world

Gathered rocks in silence
Aching hooves our pay for a hard work
Dust on my eyes and throat
I dreamed of world out of my life

I breathed the choking air on the wordless world
I walked on soil bare of seeds
Throughout the days I gazed repressed at hollow skies
A solace for indifference…


The tremor passed over our farm
In colors of rainbow light
Broke through the woods and mountains
Shaking me to the core

The spectrum of light piercing my heart
Woke me to see beauty in life
Encouraging me to shine
Open my heart and smile

Passing the wave I shared my smile
I kindled my first delight
A party to lighten our home
Comfort in hard working days

With spectrum of light I found my path
I learned to smile, sow seeds of joy
To evoke fun in laughless lives
To color the world of stone… with smiles


"Have I told you before how I got my cutie mark…?"
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LISTEN THIS SONG WITH THE POEM FOR MAXIMUM IMPACT [link]

Once again, my inner Pinkie fanboy says this is my favorite part. Come forth, as our favorite party pony recites us her tale of how Equestria was made!

This poem has some pretentious allusions which made writing this both fitting and fun. It’s based on a song named “Beginning of Time”, which alone should ring some bells regarding Pinkie’s cutie mark tale. That’s also why it was “naturally” placed as the final poem in the series. The final phrase closes the saga fitting with the theme and referencing the episode, and finally, the thumbnail is shaped like an egg similarly to the cover of eponymous “The Beginning of Times” album.

The Cutie Marks Poems: Ponies and Amorphis
Under the Clouds a New World (Fluttershy) [link]
A Spell Guided Her Quest (Rarity) [link]
No Place Like Home (Applejack) [link]
Follow the Trail of Rainbow Mane (Rainbow Dash) [link]
Awakened the Spark of Magic (Twilight Sparkle) [link]
Learning to Smile (Pinkie Pie) you are here


EDIT 25 hours, 87 favs, nearly 1190 views. This has become my 4th most popular work in one day - and still going. Damn.
Thank you, everyone. ^^ :heart:

My Little Pony (c) :iconhasbroplz:
“Beginning of Time” (c) Amorphis, from the album “The Beginning of Times”. Written by Esa Holopainen.
Song is used as a soundtrack for the lyrical content in terms of tribute, homage, parody and ponies.
The thumbnail is “There was no talking, there was no smiling…” [link] by :icon2snacks:

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My MLP poetry, My Little Poems, can be found here [link]
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~Radoxeald Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanksies! ^^
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You're welcome!
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~IcecyTheKitty Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Beautiful! :iconpinkiepiesmileplz:
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~Radoxeald Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconparty0plz: Hurray! Thank you for the comment and fav'!
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~IcecyTheKitty Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
no prob! :iconpinkiewinkplz:
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~Radoxeald Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Umm... good for you?
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Mood: Love *sweetiepie019 Sep 15, 2012  Student General Artist
oh i just found this its not me lol
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