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MY LITTLE POEM
– Ponies with Tristania

[Click here for the accompanying song]

Mother's Wish



With you
No words can hurt me
You are my light
My sole candle

For your smile is all I need to
Carry you wherever
Even with
Distorted view…

In my life I have faced it all
Carried burdens, endured hardships
Remained strong, held the tears inside
Never let you end up the same path

Your smile
It's all I wanted
It shines through
Distorted view…

I couldn't answer what went wrong
Nor do I want to hold you down, nevermore:
To help you shine brightest of all
I'd gladly give away my wings

I've tried my hardest to be the mother you'd deserve
my muffin
Try understand, I only wish for your happiness
my daughter…

"Please mom, don't cry, I don't blame you
No child could ask for kinder mom, warmer home.
Even if world turns against us
I'll always love you, kindest of all mothers."
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LISTEN THIS SONG WITH THE POEM FOR MAXIMUM IMPACT [link]

This poem started out with "Bubbles" theme, then Dinky appeared out of nowhere and it ended up as a poem about familial ties, hardships of single parenthood and mother's wish to spare her child from burdens she has had to carry through her life.

Not claiming this in any way my personal headcanon or such. I like to keep my Derpy/Dinky family interpretations open and varied, but seriously, everybrony should know at least one sad fic of these two.

Vibeke is still the greatest voice of gothic metal scene, ever.

EDIT 500 views and 37 favs in 24 hours - eeyup, people love Derpy. As if there was any doubt. Rock on :heart:
Also fixin' that link in the bottom.
EDIT2 And it reaches 100 favs! My second work so far to cross the magic line :iconsuperw00tplz: Thank you everyone ^_^

My Little Pony (c) :iconhasbroplz:
"Cure" (c) Tristania, from the album “Ashes”
Song is used as a soundtrack for the lyrical content in terms of tribute, homage, parody and ponies.

The gorgeous thumbnail is “f a d i n g” [link] by :iconeevie-chu:

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My MLP poetry, My Little Poems, can be found here [link]
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:iconkkbro123:
kkbro123 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013
Hey, made a recording cause i loved this! here ya go

[link]
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Radoxeald Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're awesome, you know that? :icondashsoawesomeplz: Try singing it next time, or reading along the flow of the song. ^^
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HetaliaHetaonigirl Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
The feels.
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:iconradoxeald:
Radoxeald Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconeverywhereplz: Feels everywhere. ^^
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:iconhetaliahetaonigirl:
HetaliaHetaonigirl Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Exactly
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:iconshadowsol93:
Shadowsol93 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
this has all my feels
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:iconradoxeald:
Radoxeald Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad it had an effect. :iconfluttershyhappyplz: Thank you.
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:icondragon-drawer78:
dragon-drawer78 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is like me, only it's my brother. :(
Fantastic job :clap:
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:iconradoxeald:
Radoxeald Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure. It's always nice to know when my works have left an impact. ^^
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ThunderMLP Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012   Digital Artist
COOL!!
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:iconradoxeald:
Radoxeald Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. ^^
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8loodyrain Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
derpy read and derp like's
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:iconradoxeald:
Radoxeald Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconderpyishappyplz: Hurray!
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EagleSpartan888 Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice work... very beautiful!

Great job!
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:iconradoxeald:
Radoxeald Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad ya liked it :iconarigatouplz:
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:iconeaglespartan888:
EagleSpartan888 Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are welcome!
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:iconijustloveit619:
ijustloveit619 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I got the feeling derpy and dinky will be connected officially :D
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:iconradoxeald:
Radoxeald Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
That would be interesting, even if rather improbably big fandom nod. But who knows? :iconditzydooplz:
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supergeek17 Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Really pretty. <3
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:iconradoxeald:
Radoxeald Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks ^_^
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supergeek17 Featured By Owner May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. ^^
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I-gotta-cold Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
Very nice piece. Everything out there seems to just be a 'Derpy is derpy' approach.

No real depth to a character that the fan base is so strongly taken to.

Same with Trixie and Luna really, all three have more to offer, if someone will just make the effort to find it.
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Radoxeald Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe, thanks. :iconraritysmileplz:

I did kinda try to come up with something that touches on a more personal level, while fitting it with the overall mood.

Oh yes, Trixie and Luna. Two very potential characters to develop fandom-wise. I did write pieces of them too, but really there are tons of other great writers to have done it before me, already.
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I-gotta-cold Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012
NP. It showed you put thought into it. None of the usual nonsense. Making her a one trick pony...as it were. ;)


Well don't sell yourself short. I'll have to check out what you did. The more people who add depth to those two, the better. Maybe the show will take notice, and do something. lol

Anyhow, good work.
(just pretend I know how to use the stupid emoticons)
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Radoxeald Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Also, thousand thanks for :+devwatch: :iconpinkieishappyplz:
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Radoxeald Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Plz account extension pack is my friend with plz emoticons ^^ [link]
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DC13master Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012   Writer
This honestly brought a tear to my eye, thank you for this magnificent peice of work
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Radoxeald Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're most welcome, I'm glad it left an impact. :iconfluttershyhappyplz:
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rawr8811 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so sweet!
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Radoxeald Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconrarityishappyplz::iconthanksplz:
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spongefan12 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice~ :)
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:iconradoxeald:
Radoxeald Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconfluttershyyayplz: Thank you.
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spongefan12 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome
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Light-of-Dusk Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is truly a tragically beautiful work of art! Simultaneously sad and heart-warming, it truly highlights the lengths to which a mother will go for her child.
There is no stronger bond on Earth, in my opinion.
Thank you for this superb piece. :)
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Radoxeald Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure :iconderpyhappyplz:
(wow, that plz feels a bit awkward in this occasion ^^')
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:iconeevie-chu:
Eevie-chu Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Professional General Artist
How absolutely lovely. Thank you so much for using my piece as the image accompaniment to this outstanding poem. Great job.
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:iconradoxeald:
Radoxeald Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconfluttershyhappyplz: Thank you! ^^
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10-Seconds-Flat Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
This made me sad =[
in a good way though.
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Radoxeald Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Then my work has been a success :iconfluttershylaughplz:
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10-Seconds-Flat Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
Dat pic
:iconfluttershycryplz:
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