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Mother's Wish

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Radoxeald

Published: Apr 27, 2012

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Literature Text

MY LITTLE POEM
– Ponies with Tristania

[Click here for the accompanying song]

Mother's Wish

With you
No words can hurt me
You are my light
My sole candle

For your smile is all I need to
Carry you wherever
Even with
Distorted view…

In my life I have faced it all
Carried burdens, endured hardships
Remained strong, held the tears inside
Never let you end up the same path

Your smile
It's all I wanted
It shines through
Distorted view…

I couldn't answer what went wrong
Nor do I want to hold you down, nevermore:
To help you shine brightest of all
I'd gladly give away my wings

I've tried my hardest to be the mother you'd deserve
my muffin
Try understand, I only wish for your happiness
my daughter…

"Please mom, don't cry, I don't blame you
No child could ask for kinder mom, warmer home.
Even if world turns against us
I'll always love you, kindest of all mothers."

LISTEN THIS SONG WITH THE POEM FOR MAXIMUM IMPACT [link]

This poem started out with "Bubbles" theme, then Dinky appeared out of nowhere and it ended up as a poem about familial ties, hardships of single parenthood and mother's wish to spare her child from burdens she has had to carry through her life.

Not claiming this in any way my personal headcanon or such. I like to keep my Derpy/Dinky family interpretations open and varied, but seriously, everybrony should know at least one sad fic of these two.

Vibeke is still the greatest voice of gothic metal scene, ever.

EDIT 500 views and 37 favs in 24 hours - eeyup, people love Derpy. As if there was any doubt. Rock on

Also fixin' that link in the bottom.
EDIT2 And it reaches 100 favs! My second work so far to cross the magic line

Thank you everyone ^_^

My Little Pony (c)

"Cure" (c) Tristania, from the album “Ashes”
Song is used as a soundtrack for the lyrical content in terms of tribute, homage, parody and ponies.

The gorgeous thumbnail is “f a d i n g” [link] by