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MY LITTLE POEM
– Ponies with Tristania

[Click here for the accompanying song]

Solitude Feast



Balloons, streamers,
Pastries left marred
Candlelit the night
For a party of lone reject

Her treats denied
Dismissed behind her back
They left her out
Upset she lies, caters the fest
In solitude
Abandoned she feasts

Once friends
They liked her, enjoyed her games and plays
Like leper now
Those backstabbers, liars,
Cowards, avoid her…

Alone you're left…
alone you're left… alone you're left…
alone you're left… alone you're left…
"Why won't they care… without my friends… I've nothing left…"
…Alone you're left… you empty soul… alone you're left… you worthless soul…


Abandonment
To fill the emptiness
She feigns the pain inside
Aching heart caters the fest
With puppet plays
Abandoned she feasts

Now castaway escapes
Within her mind, away from world she hides
Hollow sacks
Objects keep her company
Inanimate
Feast in solitude

Alone you're left… you empty soul… you worthless soul…
Alone you're left… you empty soul… you've nothing left.
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LISTEN THIS SONG WITH THE POEM FOR MAXIMUM IMPACT [link]

Based on Tristania’s song Shadowman.

Pinkie’s mental breakdown in “Party of One” is thus far my favorite scene in MLP FiM. It’s both funny and creepy delivery, but most of all underneath that it’s emotionally surprisingly strong, even shocking. The one pony you wouldn’t expect to break suddenly falls apart in fear of abandonment, when her friends appear to simply discard her without explanation. One scene giving Pinkie characterization worth the whole season. Also, Pinkie Pie is my favorite pony and every time I see her turn all Pinkamena I just want give her a hug so badly.
And no, this is by no means supposed to be PsychoPie material. I haven't read Cupcakes and never will. (I follow the comic)

Also, I managed to include the word “leper” here. I’ve waited the chance to use it one way or another since Part V of The Discordant Tale. Now I can die satisfied. :icondignitylaughplz: Yes, I’m a sick little man.


My Little Pony (c) :iconhasbroplz:
"Shadowman" (c) Tristania, from the album “Ashes”
Song is used as a soundtrack for the lyrical content in terms of tribute, homage, parody and ponies.
Getting a permission for thumbnail took a while, but was totally worth it. Image this time is "Imaginary Friendship" [link] by the one and only :iconjohnjoseco:

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My MLP poetry, My Little Poems, can be found here [link]
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Karisa108 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist
Awesome poem! This just helps my theory that 'Pinkie's Breakdown' in Party Of One is one of the scenes that fans respond to most. I AM SMART! 8^) But, uh yeah, great poem!
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Radoxeald Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, it's the scenes like PoO that leave the real impact, in-between all the memes and gags and ascended background ponies ^^
Thanksies :iconpinkiecuteplz:
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Karisa108 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist
exactly!
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8loodyrain Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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i have enjoyed this very much my good sir
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also would you like to join my group?
[link]
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Radoxeald Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconisayplz: Jolly good, jolly good! Your enjoyment gladdens us.

Looks like a potential group you have there. Sure!
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supergeek17 Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is really intense... You captured the feel of Party of One beautifully.
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Radoxeald Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Just as planned :iconsmartyplz: Thank you very much. :D
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molly0201 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Saddest poem EVER. :cry:
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Radoxeald Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'll take that as a proof my poem was a success :iconpinkiederpplz: Thanks for fav' ^^
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molly0201 Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome, I rather thought it was sad when they ignored her in Party of One :noes:
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