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MY LITTLE POEM
– Ponies with Tristania
[Click here for the accompanying song]
Solitude Feast
Balloons, streamers,
Pastries left marred
Candlelit the night
For a party of lone reject
Her treats denied
Dismissed behind her back
They left her out
Upset she lies, caters the fest
In solitude
Abandoned she feasts
Once friends
They liked her, enjoyed her games and plays
Like leper now
Those backstabbers, liars,
Cowards, avoid her…
Alone you're left…
alone you're left… alone you're left…
alone you're left… alone you're left…
"Why won't they care… without my friends… I've nothing left…"
…Alone you're left… you empty soul… alone you're left… you worthless soul…
Abandonment
To fill the emptiness
She feigns the pain inside
Aching heart caters the fest
With puppet plays
Abandoned she feasts
Now castaway escapes
Within her mind, away from world she hides
Hollow sacks
Objects keep her company
Inanimate
Feast in solitude
Alone you're left… you empty soul… you worthless soul…
Alone you're left… you empty soul… you've nothing left.
Literature
Acceptance
♫ Acceptance ♫
A Story of Discovery, Magic, and Friendship
Written by Meatabex
Edited by Wivoatt and AnnieRoshino
Literature
Flubbershy-Chapter 1
“Oh
um Rarity, are you s-sure I should do this...It's s-scary”
Fluttershy had just said this to Rarity, Fluttershy was in a red
dress with some sapphires in it, Rarity and Fluttershy were behind a
stage with many busy ponies running about, “Don't worry dear,
you'll be wonderful out there, I need to go down to the audience
section dear.” Rairty said as she waved goodbye and quickly ran
off. Fluttershy looked around “Oh Fluttershy, how did you get
yourself sucked into this”.Fluttershy remebered what had
happened only a day or two ago, Rarity had been very excited about
“Photo finish”, &l
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LISTEN THIS SONG WITH THE POEM FOR MAXIMUM IMPACT [link]
Based on Tristania’s song Shadowman.
Pinkie’s mental breakdown in “Party of One” is thus far my favorite scene in MLP FiM. It’s both funny and creepy delivery, but most of all underneath that it’s emotionally surprisingly strong, even shocking. The one pony you wouldn’t expect to break suddenly falls apart in fear of abandonment, when her friends appear to simply discard her without explanation. One scene giving Pinkie characterization worth the whole season. Also, Pinkie Pie is my favorite pony and every time I see her turn all Pinkamena I just want give her a hug so badly.
And no, this is by no means supposed to be PsychoPie material. I haven't read Cupcakes and never will. (I follow the comic)
Also, I managed to include the word “leper” here. I’ve waited the chance to use it one way or another since Part V of The Discordant Tale. Now I can die satisfied. Yes, I’m a sick little man.
My Little Pony (c)
"Shadowman" (c) Tristania, from the album “Ashes”
Song is used as a soundtrack for the lyrical content in terms of tribute, homage, parody and ponies.
Getting a permission for thumbnail took a while, but was totally worth it. Image this time is "Imaginary Friendship" [link] by the one and only
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My MLP poetry, My Little Poems, can be found here [link]
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wow that was deep. *^*
but also lovely poem! <3
but also lovely poem! <3